So here I lay wasting away
Watching the waves crash day by day
Give me more then disappointment
I want passion, I want desire
To fill me up and spread like fire
Something to take me far
I need to raise the bar
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What a great poem, my favorite part is your simile about spreading like fire. My friend and I posted some poetry (an experiment) and would love for you to come check it out.
Thank you so much! Yes of course! I’ll go take a look at it right now! Thanks again I love getting comments and knowing that people are enjoying my work 😀
Inspiring..:)
love, “to fill me up and spread like fire”
Aww thank you! It means a lot! I love getting everyones input!
Me too!! Very emotive, I enjoyed reading your work 🙂
Awe thank you so much! ❤
Really enjoyed this poem..it reminds me of the Pink Floyd lyrics from ‘Time’. Time passing us by without us noticing until it’s too late…
Aww thanks your so sweet!
Whatever You’re Passionate about, do it
DarkJade-
definitely!!
Hell yes. Please God.
Sorry I’m confused?
“I want passion, I want desire
To fill me up and spread like fire
Something to take me far
I need to raise the bar”
Oh! okay! yeah sorry had a little brain fart right there! Yes I agree!
“I’m just sitting here watching the wheels go round and round / I really love them watch them roll” –John Lennon
Sometimes, it’s not so bad just letting the world crash around you, but, like most things, only in moderation. I understand your disappointment, your desire to feel some kind of passion that you’re afraid you may have lost forever. But it will return. Life comes in waves.
“When the days they seem to fall through you, well just let them go” — Damon Albarn
That was amazing!
Just a suggestion dear, you’d love Edna St Vincent Millay. If we wish to raise the bar for others, we must raise it for ourselves, too, don’t you believe ? Succinctly said! Deborah
Thank you! I really liked it! Yes i do 😀
Thanks for following my blog. I recently read 5 of your poems and i have to say i love the way you write. It reminds me of how i think alot of times. 😉
Aww thank you!!!
love the poem and the hopeful graffiti
Thanks I thought that picture was a nice add on to the poem
Very nice…I can feel your hope and desire…..loved this…
And a warm thanks for the follow…very happy to have you and lovely to meet you…. 🙂
Celeste
Aw Thanks! No problem I love seeing everyone’s work and seeing all there perspectives 😀
I’m happy to meet you to!
Love your simple and elegant writing!
Aw thank you!! 😀
I enjoyed this piece!! 🙂
Aww thank you!!
So sums up how I feel. It’s a lovely piece and also nice to just not feel alone 🙂
I’m glad you could connect with my writing it means a lot! Your never alone ❤
Thank you for the follow. I look forward to sharing across our blogs.
Aw thanks!! ❤
What a great night for poetry. Thanks for finding my blog because the pleasure is all mine in return here to yours. This just screamed to me and I like that.
Cheers,
M
Aww thank you! I’m really glad you liked it! Have a great night!
I look forward to more and you have a great night as well
Amaaaazing poem…,thanx for follow too mam!
Thank you!!!
the first piece i’ve read on your blog..and i have to say it’s a great one, very uplifting! =)
Aw thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of my pieces.
Such an emotive and effective piece of writing, I look forward to reading more 🙂
Thanks also for stopping by and following my blog! ♥
Aww thank you!
This is exactly how I’ve been feeling lately! Recently I discovered that I enjoy writing, when I used to hate it haha. I love this poem, and it inspires me to keep up with my writing : )
I’m glad you could relate to it and yes keep writing!!
snaps (poetry people say snaps, right?).
This is great. I really liked it. Thanks for sharing.
That’s what I’ve heard
but I’ve never been to a poetry reading 😀