Hate me so I know I made you mourn
You used to be something more
Of course, that was before, I started this storm
I am the creator who never should have destroyed our work
If I could take it back
I’d take you back first
Destroying you put me at my worst
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Very powerful words and photo. I enjoyed this very much!
Thank you! š
sounds honestly self-revealing..lovely
Yeah it’s pretty emotional
very nice post indeed
“Destroying you put me at my worst” is a very powerful line. Gave me goosebumps on first read…
I’m glad my writing has that effect š
Very thought provoking ~Thanks Deborah
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some will think its painful, others beautiful. amazing poem.
Aww thank you! I think its a mix of both! I’m glad you liked it!
soul baring….raw and wonderful
Aw thank you!
Powerful words here. Thank you for stopping by my blog by the way.
Thanks! Yes of course!
Nice use of rhyme in a not overwhelming way.
Thanks!!!
Thank you for checking out my blog! I truly enjoyed yours!!! Keep them coming!
Aww thanks!
Wow, I really like this. It’s got the perfect twang of pain underlying the words. Can’t wait to read more, and thanks for stopping by on my blog!
Aww thank you! Your so sweet! I’m glad you liked it!
We’ve all wished we could take something we’ve said or done back to save the situation, this poem sums it up so perfectly, it’s well written, with engaging emotions š
Aww thank you so much!!
I really like this. It can be read as either personal, or it could even have a religious meaning, as if God were talking. I like a poem that can speak differently to each reader!
Thank you! Wow I just noticed how it could come off as religious to.
Amazingly put; strong words illustration
Thank you so much it can be seen as personal or biblical!
strongly written, now these words got tatooed in my heart!
Aww thank you! I’m glad my words have affected you ā¤
well, it would have affected most people who read your post.
Pretty much anyone who has been with someone special